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Awesome Day

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woo I love the way you did this picture, it"S really cute and our dear Dashie looks so friendly, I just love it :33 But what looks strange to me is that she is missing nostrils. I see you don"t draw them, but I kinda miss them here :c I also love that for contours you have chosen other colour than blue so you could put more of blue in the background <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/> I see the rising sun in her eyes, that"s a really good effect ^^ but that"s another thing what looks a bit out of place for me. The sun can be seen only in her eyes, nowhere else, like on the clouds or on her body, I would try to put some colours of the sun there <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/> But otherwise I love this >w< keep up with good work! ^^